Dave Hughes: Wait, Make ’em Unfiltered

Please,
just let it be quick.
But of course,
you don’t even get to ask that,
do you?
We live with so little dignity,
why,
would we be allowed it in dying.
You sneeze,
while taking a shit,
burst a vessel in your head,
and then,
you’re praying for death,
laying in a bed,
mostly forgotten by the world,
gurgling to nursing home staff,
while they efficiently abuse you,
and in some monstrous tango,
you mutually strip each other,
of what little humanity you each have left.

 

 

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