We all try to flee
the suburbs at 5 p.m.
like mice from a storm.
The highway curves left,
red tail lights swimming upstream,
fighting towards home.
Department stores line
the gray cement river banks,
big box behemoths.
Clouds roil overhead;
the indigo sky unfurls
on granite prairie.
Neon and concrete
stretching on for miles between
me and home sweet home.
I like your poem.
So accurate, so timely.
Can I go home now?
Nicely done 🙂